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                爱的背后 （于2007-05-21改为此名）
                    作者：dina来自未来
            第一章    她总是第一时间想起她的情人
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        一间并不算大的房子，一个晴空万里的白天，一名浓妆艳抹的二十五、六岁女人站在明亮的玻璃窗前打着电话。
     “喂！老公啊！是我，小野！”这个艳丽的女人娇声嗲气地对着话筒另一边说着，“你今天晚上有空吗？今天我休息，晚上想去你家。你看……”她一边欣赏着手中镜子里的“半个妖怪”，一边极具“女人魅力语气”地询问着。
                  The Plot (It’s changed into this name on 21/05/2007)
                                           By
                                     Dina From Future
                 Chapter One   Her Lover Always Comes to Her Mind First
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     In a vast clear day, a heavily made up woman, around twenty five or six, she, who is standing beside the bright window of a not so large house, making a telephone call.
    “ Hello, honey! It’s me. Your Xiaoye,” with the coquettish tone, this coquettish woman talks to the phone, “ Are you free tonight? I want to go to your home tonight since today is my holiday, so…” Enjoying the “half demon” in her hand’s mirror, she asks in the tone of “femininity”